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Monday, April 20, 2009

Plan!!!

Thesis statement:Though two kinds’ discussion, they also didn't have the answer for this question, and this exploration made them affray,and they had different standpoints for the same question, the exploration can make people know many things need to learn, explore, and look for.
Introduction: Setting:hill Time: Long long ago

Rising action: Two kinds wanted to explore the sun when close to us and when far away us. The scholar saw them and helped them.

Climax: The scholar didn't know the answer. Two kinds were laugh. The scholar know the many things need to learn, explore, and look for.

Falling action: The scholar found why this question just no answer and the exploration can made people affray and misunderstanding.

Conclusion: Thesis statement and small idea to big idea.
_____Small The exploration can make people affray and misunderstanding.
_____Big It can influence develop for the country and history.

1 comment:

  1. Lacks detail.
    You should do your plan before you write your essay.
    Use more of your own words.
    Give names to your characters.

    6/10

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