Be careful with your grammar! "Fierce" does not need a capital!
The simplistic style of this ship enhances the figurehead of the dragon or horse-like figure.
Think deeper and write deeper to get a higher mark.
3/5 Good work!
Milly,
You can do so much better! Please put your heart into your studies. It is very important for you. I have noticed you are not doing as well as before. I hope everything is alright. Please let me know if you need any help or just want to talk.
Be careful with your grammar! "Fierce" does not need a capital!
ReplyDeleteThe simplistic style of this ship enhances the figurehead of the dragon or horse-like figure.
Think deeper and write deeper to get a higher mark.
3/5 Good work!
Milly,
You can do so much better! Please put your heart into your studies. It is very important for you. I have noticed you are not doing as well as before. I hope everything is alright. Please let me know if you need any help or just want to talk.
Ms. Chan